At
Writers Connect, group leader Oz
brought in some old black-and-white photographs for us to use as
prompts for a writing exercise. I picked out one picture but didn't
get a copy of it. In retro I could have snapped it on my phone. Oh well.
It was a 1960's scene of a busy high street. Here's the garbled
vignette I produced:
“Where'd
you get that shirt mate, 1965?”
The
teens nudged each other, sniggering.
He
looked down, perplexed. “Well, yeah.” He took the box out of his
pocket. The LED still flashed.
“What's
that?” Teen 1 asked.
“Something
I made,” he mumbled. He looked around. Not much was different, but
the roads were busier, the pavements jammed full of style-less
people, the buildings glassier. Yet despite all this, the town was
quieter, more stealthily hostile.
The
photographer was nowhere to be seen. He'd been stood right in front
of him, taking his picture and getting a shopper and her young son in
the frame by chance. They weren't here, but hundreds of others were.
“The
camera guy,” he said to the teens. “Where is he?”
“Which
one?” a boy says. “Everyone's got cameras.” He waves a metal
rectangle at him, a thin box.
“Look,”
the man says. “He gave me this.” He pulls the picture out of his
cordoroys, a monochrome scene of the street, structurally the same
but the street is now visually odd- cluttered, fierce. He held up the
picture to compare. That's when he registered the gaping hole where
his head should have been. The picture itself was deteriorating.
So,
yeah, sorry about the inverted Back to the Future reference- when
you've only got 10 minutes you've got to write whatever comes into
your head. Old photos can be a good impetus for a creative writing
piece.
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